From A Basketball Star To A monster:word choice

I was a basketball champion on the basketball team. I was so worried about English class because if I didn't pass the exam then I couldn't play basketball. I walked into the cold air-conditioned room and started walking down the aisle to my seat. When I got there the teacher passed out the exam and I started working straight away. 2 hours passed and finally I finished the exam so I passed it up to the English teacher. After English class when everyone had finished the exam we had basketball practice. For some reason though I didn't really play aswell for the fear of the exam I took in English class. When the bell rang at 3:30pm to go home I felt extremely sick and tired so I quickly ran home and slept away the sickness. When I woke up I had fungus growing all over me and I yelled out "AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!" Mum came running up the stairs so fast that she bumped into the door and fell down. She had a concussion!
I got out of bed and sprinted to the kitchen to see what time it was. The time was 3:30pm the next day! I went into the bathroom and started putting zit cream all over my face. It smothered my face and in a few minutes my face was bleeding because the fungus fed on zit cream. It stung so badly so stripped off my clothes and jumped into the shower to get the zit cream off.
When the cream finally wiped off I looked in the mirror. I realized my skin had been half ripped off and you could see some of my skull. Even though I didn't know how to drive I jumped into my dad's car anyway because I needed to get to the hospital straight away. As I ripped down the road in my dad's Waja I thought about what the doctor would say about it. I parked in the emergency parking spot and sprinted inside and ran to the nearest doctor office I could find. When I got in there the doctor yelled out, " OH MY GOODNESS, A WILD BEAST HAS ESCAPED FROM THE SCIENTIEST EXAMINTION BUILDING!!!!" Suddenly the doctor shot me with a sleeping gun and when I woke up I was in a white room surrounded by glass. Scientists were pointing at me and talking to one another.
When I looked closely enough at the scientists I saw a little bit of green on their faces. This must mean I was at the mental institute! I quickly looked at my arms and legs and they were all tied up in a bag. I just lay there and waited and waited and waited..... "BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEEP" went off My alarm clock. It was time for school and I would be getting back the results for my English test.
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