The Gruesome Adventures Of Ben Scabby:Sentence fluency

"Oh my goodness!!!!!" yelled Ben as he had just woken up from a horrible nightmare. It was about his mother being killed by his father and her brain was oozing out from her eye sockets. It was a very horrible sight. Ben ran downstairs thinking in his head that now he could cuddle up to his mother and not be afraid of her being dead anymore. When Ben found his mother's laptop, he couldn't help but scream because about a litre of blood was splashed against the laptop. Ben ran around the house so scared but he was too young to faint. Suddenly he found himself look at his mother dead on the floor. Her brain was oozing out of her eye sockets and her chest had the words carved into her which were written with a knife, "The person who did this is looking for BEN." "Here I am you crazy man!!!!" yelled Ben as he ran out of the house to find his friend who was his neigbour. Surprisingly Ben's friend wasn't at home. The (creature) who answered the door was his friend. But was he?
"I vant to suck your blood!" yelled Ben's friend. "I always knew you were crazy my good old friend Jack, but I didn't know you were crazy enough to fake being a vampire and try to kill me!" "I am not vaking you veird little veing!" "Whatever, Loser" said Ben to his wanna be vampire friend. Jack and Ben hurried down to the police station. Bullets came flying at Jack because he looked like a vampire. The two boys hurried to a forgotten wood where foxes roamed freely and snakes could hunt mice in two seconds without being killed by a human. When the boys found themselves there they huddled up into a little ball and waited for this madness to end. "RRAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!" Yelled a wild beast that hadn't had fresh meat for two days. "Run!" whispered Ben to Jack. The two 5 year old boys sprinted out of the woods where atleast it was safer than in that god forsaken forest.
"This is very scary" spoke Jack as the boys spinted down the road not thinking of what to do." You just noticed stupid?" retorted Ben." Shut the heck up meany" whined Jack."Well I guess I have become a pretty stupid idiot and so I will eat you Jack because I fell like a barbarian." said Ben in a bickering voice."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!"screamed Jack "I'm just kidding stupid." told Ben in a very annoying voice for Jack to hear. "You'll never change Ben " said Jack as they walked down the road.
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