The Gruesome Adventures Of Ben Scabby: sequel to the amazing story you read before!

As Ben and Jack walked down the path both of them suddenly realised they were hearing a low grumbling sound that went,"gggrrrrrummmmmbbbbllllleeeee." Both of them startled as zombies started walking towards them with knives in their hands. "Holy moly!!!!" yelled Ben. "Sorry Ben but now I am going to faint because this is too scary to witness."said Jack in a very sorry voice. Booooooffffff! Down fell Jack.
Suddenly the zombies started throwing knives at Ben wildy. This took Ben by surprise and hit him straight in the testicles. "OOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCHHHHHHHH!!Screamed Ben as blood was pouring from his legs. "Just at that second in the miricle of time Jack woke up and started running at the zombies with a stick. Seeing as the zombies had already thrown all of their knives, they couldn't do any damge to Jack so he just started poking out their eyeballs with pleasure and clawing off their stomache. "YEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!" yelled Jack because now they wouldn't die from those idiotic zombies! "Leave me, I am not worthy to live anymore. Well ok Ben but you're pretty silly for wanting me to leave you like this.
A moment later, Ben lay down as he would forever.

The Gruesome Adventures Of Ben Scabby:Sentence fluency

"Oh my goodness!!!!!" yelled Ben as he had just woken up from a horrible nightmare. It was about his mother being killed by his father and her brain was oozing out from her eye sockets. It was a very horrible sight. Ben ran downstairs thinking in his head that now he could cuddle up to his mother and not be afraid of her being dead anymore. When Ben found his mother's laptop, he couldn't help but scream because about a litre of blood was splashed against the laptop. Ben ran around the house so scared but he was too young to faint. Suddenly he found himself look at his mother dead on the floor. Her brain was oozing out of her eye sockets and her chest had the words carved into her which were written with a knife, "The person who did this is looking for BEN." "Here I am you crazy man!!!!" yelled Ben as he ran out of the house to find his friend who was his neigbour. Surprisingly Ben's friend wasn't at home. The (creature) who answered the door was his friend. But was he?
"I vant to suck your blood!" yelled Ben's friend. "I always knew you were crazy my good old friend Jack, but I didn't know you were crazy enough to fake being a vampire and try to kill me!" "I am not vaking you veird little veing!" "Whatever, Loser" said Ben to his wanna be vampire friend. Jack and Ben hurried down to the police station. Bullets came flying at Jack because he looked like a vampire. The two boys hurried to a forgotten wood where foxes roamed freely and snakes could hunt mice in two seconds without being killed by a human. When the boys found themselves there they huddled up into a little ball and waited for this madness to end. "RRAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!" Yelled a wild beast that hadn't had fresh meat for two days. "Run!" whispered Ben to Jack. The two 5 year old boys sprinted out of the woods where atleast it was safer than in that god forsaken forest.
"This is very scary" spoke Jack as the boys spinted down the road not thinking of what to do." You just noticed stupid?" retorted Ben." Shut the heck up meany" whined Jack."Well I guess I have become a pretty stupid idiot and so I will eat you Jack because I fell like a barbarian." said Ben in a bickering voice."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!"screamed Jack "I'm just kidding stupid." told Ben in a very annoying voice for Jack to hear. "You'll never change Ben " said Jack as they walked down the road.
THE END

From A Basketball Star To A monster:word choice

I was a basketball champion on the basketball team. I was so worried about English class because if I didn't pass the exam then I couldn't play basketball. I walked into the cold air-conditioned room and started walking down the aisle to my seat. When I got there the teacher passed out the exam and I started working straight away. 2 hours passed and finally I finished the exam so I passed it up to the English teacher. After English class when everyone had finished the exam we had basketball practice. For some reason though I didn't really play aswell for the fear of the exam I took in English class. When the bell rang at 3:30pm to go home I felt extremely sick and tired so I quickly ran home and slept away the sickness. When I woke up I had fungus growing all over me and I yelled out "AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!" Mum came running up the stairs so fast that she bumped into the door and fell down. She had a concussion!
I got out of bed and sprinted to the kitchen to see what time it was. The time was 3:30pm the next day! I went into the bathroom and started putting zit cream all over my face. It smothered my face and in a few minutes my face was bleeding because the fungus fed on zit cream. It stung so badly so stripped off my clothes and jumped into the shower to get the zit cream off.
When the cream finally wiped off I looked in the mirror. I realized my skin had been half ripped off and you could see some of my skull. Even though I didn't know how to drive I jumped into my dad's car anyway because I needed to get to the hospital straight away. As I ripped down the road in my dad's Waja I thought about what the doctor would say about it. I parked in the emergency parking spot and sprinted inside and ran to the nearest doctor office I could find. When I got in there the doctor yelled out, " OH MY GOODNESS, A WILD BEAST HAS ESCAPED FROM THE SCIENTIEST EXAMINTION BUILDING!!!!" Suddenly the doctor shot me with a sleeping gun and when I woke up I was in a white room surrounded by glass. Scientists were pointing at me and talking to one another.
When I looked closely enough at the scientists I saw a little bit of green on their faces. This must mean I was at the mental institute! I quickly looked at my arms and legs and they were all tied up in a bag. I just lay there and waited and waited and waited..... "BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEEP" went off My alarm clock. It was time for school and I would be getting back the results for my English test.
THE END

Soma And The Lost Dragon:voice

Dad woke me up at 6:00am saying that I had to get up and help my grandfather garden. I was so tired because I had stayed up until 3:00am playing Rakion. Incase you're wondering, I stayed up so that I could get to the last level of Rakion and defeat the dragon named Drakkisath. My brain was urging me to make it to the last level and finally I did. I took slow steps into the chamber because Drakkisath might suddenly blow my brains out with his fiery breath. When I got in the chamber on the wall it read, "There is no dragon to defeat here, I have brought him to a far away island where he will serve as a slave."
"I can't let this happen." I yelled to myself, then suddenly a voice wispered back to me, " It already has happened, muahaha!" Quickly I ran towards the shop to buy a flying a disk and some creatures. The creatures would help me fight the evil person that did this. I jumped onto the flying disk and strangely I found some dragon footprints and started flying after them.
Suddenly A huge dragon sweeped out of the sky and crushed my flying disk. I quickly let out my creature but I was too late. The dragon let out a huge cry and then blew so much fire that I burnt to a crisp. That was the end of my character. I'm still remembered to this day how I tried to restore the game back to it's best. Everybody respects my character and it's corpse.
THE END